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Post by ryanmvp on Mar 22, 2018 2:46:15 GMT
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Post by brianc on Mar 26, 2018 18:20:05 GMT
Nice work, man. Could use some polish(commas mostly) ,but I like how the story sets up this classic character to be a truly disturbed person. It's like we've been told fake news about this sweet goody goody child all our lives. I'd like to have some more insight into her motives, though, so keep it up.
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